R.T:different sentence starters.
N.L:to persuade.
I think that we should have zoo
because if animals go hunting they
can get baddeley injured
or get sick from the other
animals. If there is one type of species
the zoo keepers can bred them to make
more like 300. Things
that has that zoos. the monkey cage is are
bigger. The lion are gone. The elephants are leaving.
you should write about
showed we have news or not
we learnt about should we have zoos
or not. You should write about showed we
have news or not. My favourite part was when
I started to read about zoo debates.
Good job brodi i liked how you highlighted where your R:T is keep up the good work
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